My ebook, Crutch, is now available for purchase at most retailers. I would greatly appreciate it if you checked it out and left me a review. :)
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I hope you enjoy!
Saturday, May 2, 2015
Thursday, April 30, 2015
3 Ways to Pump Up the Suspense
So I just finished a novel by Kevin O'Brien called Unspeakable. He is one of the authors I had the privilege of meeting while at the Wordcrafters conference. It is the first mystery/thriller I have ever read. I stayed up until two in the morning just to finish it. I tend to bisect stories while I'm reading, so I learned several things about creating suspense in a story.
1. Point of view. I usually write in first person, but recently I've heard a lot of people say that they liked using third person better. While I think that first person is very good for giving the readers a personal look at the protagonist, I also have discovered that you can create characters and portray them to the readers in more detail when writing in third person. One of the things that was so good about that Kevin O'Brien book was that you REALLY cared about the characters and were rooting for them throughout the whole thing. It made for an extremely suspenseful climax.
2. Constant tension. When I write, I usually feel like if I want to keep the readers interested, I need to have an action scene in every chapter. But discovered by reading Unspeakable that that's not the case. You don't have to have a fight scene every chapter to put the suspense. What added suspense in that book was that every scene was set up so that the worst possible thing could happen -- whether it happened or not -- the protagonist was aware of it. Sometimes they thought they were being stalked. Sometimes the lights went out and they heard strange noises. Most of the time, it ended up being nothing or the scene cut off, but this kept you in constant suspense. This concept was kind of a huge epiphany for me. It greatly affects how you look at your own writing.
3. Think creepy. This is the advice that Kevin O'Brien gave at the conference. Don't go for the stereotypical, make things abstract and strange. This doesn't mean that you have to be gory and gruesome, but you should bring some fear to the readers, particularly when presenting the antagonist to them. The creepier things get and the more you pump up the suspense, the more they're going to care about what happens to your characters.
I would strongly recommend reading some of his work. It is very entertaining and educational. Thank you for listening to my ramblings. If you have any input, please comment below.
1. Point of view. I usually write in first person, but recently I've heard a lot of people say that they liked using third person better. While I think that first person is very good for giving the readers a personal look at the protagonist, I also have discovered that you can create characters and portray them to the readers in more detail when writing in third person. One of the things that was so good about that Kevin O'Brien book was that you REALLY cared about the characters and were rooting for them throughout the whole thing. It made for an extremely suspenseful climax.
2. Constant tension. When I write, I usually feel like if I want to keep the readers interested, I need to have an action scene in every chapter. But discovered by reading Unspeakable that that's not the case. You don't have to have a fight scene every chapter to put the suspense. What added suspense in that book was that every scene was set up so that the worst possible thing could happen -- whether it happened or not -- the protagonist was aware of it. Sometimes they thought they were being stalked. Sometimes the lights went out and they heard strange noises. Most of the time, it ended up being nothing or the scene cut off, but this kept you in constant suspense. This concept was kind of a huge epiphany for me. It greatly affects how you look at your own writing.
3. Think creepy. This is the advice that Kevin O'Brien gave at the conference. Don't go for the stereotypical, make things abstract and strange. This doesn't mean that you have to be gory and gruesome, but you should bring some fear to the readers, particularly when presenting the antagonist to them. The creepier things get and the more you pump up the suspense, the more they're going to care about what happens to your characters.
I would strongly recommend reading some of his work. It is very entertaining and educational. Thank you for listening to my ramblings. If you have any input, please comment below.
Monday, April 13, 2015
Sneak peek to Crutch
"Bullied
at school. Tormented by his brother. A disappointment to his parents.
No one believes that Conner, a disabled young man, will make it
through society's deadly coming of age ceremony. On the eve of
his birthday, he must overcome what his peers label as weakness and
learn that strength is not just a physical quality. But as he is
pushed to his limits, will he be able to bolster what little
self-confidence lies within?"
This is the synopsis for the short story I just self-published to ebook. Crutch. I am super excited about getting some of my work out there. If you are interested, it will be available at Smashwords on May 2. It is also be available for pre-order at:
. It is only 0.99 cents. I would love it if you downloaded it and left me a review.
Here is a sneak peek of the first 30%:
Spread the word!
This is the synopsis for the short story I just self-published to ebook. Crutch. I am super excited about getting some of my work out there. If you are interested, it will be available at Smashwords on May 2. It is also be available for pre-order at:
And at:
http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/crutch-alex-rushmer/1121725695?ean=2940151864848
Now at Amazon:
http://www.amazon.com/Crutch-Kari-Rushmer-ebook/dp/B00X4B2PA0/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1430765666&sr=8-1&keywords=crutch+alex+rushmer
Now at Amazon:
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Here is a sneak peek of the first 30%:
My family didn't talk to me in
the morning. Not one teacher called on me in class. The ride home
from school was silent. For the first time in months I didn't have to
deal with bullies. They know what today means. The law forbids
interference of any kind.
Tomorrow I turn eighteen.
Tomorrow I become a man. And tonight is my coming of age ceremony. I
have prepared my whole life for this, and I am ready.
Warm yellow light from the
evening sun illuminates the dining room. The smell of pepperoni
leaves my mouth watering with anticipation. But I fold my hands
grudgingly as my father says grace before supper. His voice seems to
expand up to the high ceiling and then bounce back down toward us. I
try to focus on the words, but my older brother kicks my shrunken leg
under the table every few seconds. Hot anger surges beneath my
cheeks.
No matter. Tomorrow he will
never jeer at me again. Tomorrow I will prove myself.
“Amen,” the moment my
father says the word, I reach out and pull a slab of pizza off the
platter in front of us.
Normally my mom would scold me;
her lips purse, but she remains silent.
Light sparkles in the
chandelier above us, casting rainbow flecks about the room. I eat
with ravenous hunger, watching birds flit in the hawthorn outside the
window. The only sound to disturb the heavy silence is occasional
clatter of utensils as my mom eats with a fork and knife. Her face is
taut and stiff, as if she sent it to be starched along with her best
clothes. But her sharp gray eyes are fixed on her plate.
After several minutes, my dad
wipes his mouth with his napkin and sets it down on the table,
clearing his throat. “Well, today is the day, Conner,” his tone
is short and business-like. His heavy brow lies above his eyes like a
storm cloud, casting deep shadows.
Mom looks up at him
expectantly, but my brother continues to eat as if he hadn't heard.
“Yes, sir,” I nod.
“Are you ready?” his eyes
wander to my crutches, propped up next to the table.
I scowl. He thinks that I am
going to die. They all do. The weak do not survive in a world torn by
war, and a pale-faced, cripple of a boy is never counted among the
strong. He expects me to be weeded out. I repeat, “Yes, sir.”
“Don't worry,” my brother
looks up, a small smirk twisting his lips. We are complete opposites.
His skin is tanned; I burn after five minutes in the sun. He is built
broad and firm; I am angular and wiry. Black hair as opposed to
platinum blond hair. Dark eyes as opposed to blue eyes. He takes
after my parents. Maybe that's why I get treated like the anomaly.
“I'm sure that if worst comes to worse, he can beat it to death
with a crutch.”
I
resist the urge to kick him under the table. He can hit much
harder than I.
“This is no joking matter,
Ben,” my dad scolds.
“Yes, sir,” his voice holds
a tone of mock respect.
My dad's attention is turned
back to me. “Now, if you think you are ready, I suggest that you go
up soon and get it over with. We will spend the night downstairs.”
I nod.
For a moment, I think he is
done, then he continues, “Whatever happens tonight, remember that
your mother and I are proud of you.” He rests his hand on hers, and
a small smile creases her tight face.
I
snort. They really do
think I'm going to die. “Yeah, okay dad. Can I go?”
He nods, his brow furrowed.
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Thursday, April 9, 2015
Write!!!
Hey there! Sorry it's been so long since I've posted, but between school and driver's ed, my time has been kind of booked up. Last month, I had the pleasure of going to the Wordcrafters conference in Eugene, Oregon. I strongly recommend that you look them up. I had amazing opportunities to connect with other writers, and I got to meet people like Kevin O'Brien, Gail Tsukiyama, and Eric Whitchey. I even had the opportunity to have some of these people look at the first few pages of my book and give me input.
I learned a lot that I'll probably post about later, but one of the biggest things that was imprinted in my mind was the need for writers to write.
Well, duh! That's obvious!
Yes, but sometimes it's not quite that simple a concept. Sometimes we get bogged down or discouraged, and we don't think that our work is any good. We forget to take off our editing hat when we are writing the first draft, and we just feel like scrapping it. Maybe you're trying to send your book to a publisher and you've got a rejection. I think the thing that makes a writer a writer is the ability to take those rejections and move on. To keep writing even when they think that they are failures. To never give up on themselves.
Kevin O'Brien, a New York Times Bestselling author, got seventy-five rejections before his first book was published! Seventy-five!
I don't know about you, but that gave me a lot of comfort. Just because a publisher isn't interested in your work now doesn't mean that they won't be later. So keep writing!
Sunday, February 15, 2015
Before the Storm
Well, here's the next one. Sorry it's so long, but I couldn't really find a good stopping point. I hope you enjoy!
I
pass by these and walk up the staircase to the palace. A circular
courtyard surrounds it. Though the palace is built out of simple wood
and stone, it is decorated with intricate pillars and arches. After I
manage to get the guard to let me in, I walk into the cavernous hall.
The
air is ice cold, piercing through my layers of clothing. The thin
covering of snow reflects the light from the white sky, making me
squint. The fir trees rustle in the faint breeze. Huge, snow-covered
mountains loom all around.
We
stumble out of the cave, our clothing ragged and torn, faces dirty,
blood dripping from wounds.
“Wait!”
Ralof suddenly orders, crouching down.
Shayn
puts up no protest, slumping down against a rock at the mouth of the
cave. A distant roar echoes, bouncing off the mountains. I peer over
the rock to see the dragon flying past, disappearing into the
mountain.
“There
it goes,” Ralof stands again. “Looks like he's gone for good this
time. But I don't want to stick around to see if he comes back.”
I
nod, taking a deep breath. All the strength drains from my limbs, and
I sway on my feet. “What now?” I ask. “The Imperials are going
to be after us.”
Ralof
nods, “Better clear out of here.” He rubs his hand against his
face, “We're going to have to lie low.”
“What
about the others?” Shayn looks up at us, eyelids drooping.
Ralof
looks back toward the cave, “No way to know how many of them made
it out alive. But I am going to wait to see if the others can catch
up. I need to know if Jarl Ulfric survived.”
“I'll
get him to safety,” I glance at Shayn.
A
faint smile spreads across Ralof's face, “My sister, Gerdur, runs
the mill in Riverwood, just up the road. I'm sure she'd help you two
out.” After a moment, he asks, “Do you know where that is?”
I
snort, “Of course.” Then I say, “Thank you.”
“Don't
thank me,” is his reply as he grips my hand. “I wouldn't have
made it without your help today.”
“Talos
guide you,” my voice is soft.
Shayn
grabs a thick stick off the ground, using it to slowly haul himself
upright.
Ralof
turns to him, “Make sure that the Jarl of Whiterun gets a
detachment to Riverwood. That village isn't safe if there is a dragon
on the loose.”
Shayn
nods, smiling faintly, “By your orders.”
I
move over to him, and he puts his arm around my shoulders. But he
leans against the stick for support, holding onto me more for
balance. We begin making our way down the slope. Snow crunches
beneath us. Progress is painfully slow – my limbs are stiff, and he
limps heavily. The silence is strange. It feels like the whole world
should be in turmoil after what had happened.
Shayn
looks over at me, his twisted, “How did you get involved in all
this.”
I
shrug, “I was in the wrong place at the wrong time.”
He
nods, “We all were, it would seem.”
The
snow disappears as we go down farther. Ragged blades of grass sprout
from the rocky soil. Ferns curl up between the fir trees. After what
seems like an eternity, we come to a cobblestone road. Beyond that is
a narrow river. Clear water flows through it, rushing softly.
“See
that ruin up there?” Shayn points.
I
look up at the mountain opposite the river. Near the top on one side
I see an assortment of towering structures, crooked and not even
quite symmetrical. Black pillars form crooked arches and strange
buildings.
“When
I was a boy places like that always used to give me nightmares.
Draugr creeping down the mountain to climb through my window at
night, that kind of thing.” His shoulders lift.
“Huh,”
I shrug, looking down at the road. “I guess I never thought about
it.”
“That
doesn't surprise me,” his lips twist.
My
brow furrows, “What's that supposed to mean?”
“The
Dunmer deal with all that dark stuff better than the Nords,” he
grins. “Yeah, I know what you are.”
Anger
courses beneath my cheeks, making my voice soft, “You know
nothing.”
“If
you say so,” he shrugs.
An
awkward silence passes over us. As time drags by, the sun becomes low
in the sky. The light falls in yellow rays between the mountains.
Shayn's face begins to go deathly white, and he cringes with every
step.
“Almost
there,” I say.
His
voice sounds strained, “I could do this all day.”
As
we round a corner, I see the town ahead, nestled in the trees. On a
small island in the river is a sawmill, stacked with logs. At the
front of the town, above the gate, is a wooden platform like a small
watchtower. But no guards pace back and forth across it. I breathe a
sigh of relief. If there were guards, they stop us for sure.
I
hear a clanking from the blacksmith working beneath his shelter.
Candles are lit inside the small, wooden houses. The sound of a lute
comes from what must be the inn. A dog runs across the cobblestones,
barking with its tongue hanging out. When I close my eyes, I see the
houses aflame, collapsing as they had in Helgen into piles of ash.
We
cross a small bridge across the narrow river over to the mill. The
saw grinds back and forth. Men cut the logs up, moving about nimbly.
When they see us, they stop to stare.
“There,”
Shayn points toward a woman writing on a piece of paper resting on a
table.
Her
light hair is pulled back away from her kind face. She looks at us
and frowns.
For
lack of a better opening, I pant, “Ralof said you could help us
out.”
She
looks at us a long moment, eyes roving from my dirty face to Shayn's.
Her voice holds a thick accent, “Ralof. How do you know him?”
“I
think it would be better if we didn't talk out in the open,” I
glance around.
“Answer
my question first,” her arms fold.
My
voice is a whisper, “A dragon attacked Helgen and destroyed it.
Ralof and I escaped together.”
A
look of disbelief spreads across her face. She shakes her head. “You
better come inside.”
I
nod.
She
leads the way back across the river and down the road. Behind houses,
small gardens produce bright, strong vegetables. She comes to the
door of a large house opposite the blacksmith's workshop and lets us
in. On one side, a large fire is built up on the hearth. Shelves hold
books and vegetables that must have been harvested recently. Dishes
are already set out on the table. A large pot is mounted over the
fire, filling the house with a delectable smell that nearly makes me
swoon. It must have the same effect one Shayn because he sways next
to me.
Gerdur
must notice it because she orders, “Onto the bed.”
“I'm
fine,” he mumbles, hair hanging into his face.
She
points at it, staring at him.
He
limps over to the bed, grumbling, and practically collapses on it.
The warmth makes the tension leave my limbs. I take off my shield and
the weaponry weighing me down, dropping them by the door.
She
gestures toward the pot, “Please, get yourself something to eat.”
“Thank
you,” I grab a bowl of the table and ladle stew into it, slurping
ravenously.
Gerdur
grabs several towels and a bottle on the shelf, then seats herself
beside Shayn. “Remove your armor,” she says.
He
frowns at her, “Do what?
Her
lips twist, “Don't flatter yourself, soldier boy. Now remove your
armor so I can fix you up.”
Slowly,
his eyes flitting about with suspicion, he removes his armor. His
thin, cotton garments are in tatters. Several holes are scorched in
the cloth. Under that, I see where his chain mail was burned into his
flesh from the fire. But she examines the nasty wound in his leg
first, beginning to clean it.
He
makes no sound, lying there obediently.
“Now,”
Gerdur glances at me. “Tell me what happened at Helgen.”
I
give her a short account between mouthfuls of stew, my memory of it a
little foggy with exhaustion.
“A
dragon?” she shakes her head once I've finished. “It...It can't
be. They've been gone for so many years. Although it would explain
what I saw earlier flying down the valley from the south. I thought I
must have just been seeing things.”
Shayn
chuckles, “So did I until it just about set me on fire.”
“It
was a dragon,” I insist. “Ralof will tell you the same thing.”
She
glances at me, “Where is he? Did he make it out safely?”
“Yes,”
I nod, pulling up a chair from the table. “He was waiting to see if
anyone else made it out.”
She
is silent for a long moment, focusing on the task of bandaging
Shayn's leg. “I believe you,” her voice is soft. “You two have
the look of someone who's seen a dragon.” She rolls her eyes,
“Things just go from bad to worse. First the war, now dragons.
What's this world coming to? The Jarl needs to know if there's a
dragon on the loose. Riverwood is defenseless. We need to get word to
Jarl Balgruuf in Whiterun to send whatever troops he can.”
Shayn
sits up, “We should go now. Do you have a horse for me to borrow?”
She
attempts to push him down. “Slow down. Morning will come soon
enough.” Then she walks over to a table at the other end of the
room. “Now I know I have a health potion here somewhere.”
Shayn
leans back against the wall. He already looks a little better.
I
walk over to Gerdur to refill my bowl in time to see her put a pinch
of something into a small vial. “What's that?” I ask.
“Nothing,”
is her soft reply. “Just something to make him sleep.”
I
nod, taking another spoonful of stew. “I'll go to Whiterun
tomorrow. Will you wake me at dawn?”
“Of
course. You can sleep by the hearth,” she walks back over to Shayn.
“I'll find you a blanket.”
He
takes the vial and drinks from it without hesitation. Gerdur goes
outside after handing me a blanket. I remove my armor from my sore
body, feeling suddenly weightless.
“Hey,
elf,” Shayn's voice is a bit slurred, his eyes only half open.
“What's your name?'
I
fold my arms, offering a wry smile, “I'll tell you so long as you
stop calling me that.”
He
nods.
“Myra,”
I shrug, settling down next to the fire.
His
head falls back against the pillow, eyes closing.
I
lie down beside the hearth, drawing the thick blanket around my
shoulders. The sound of Gerdur entering again to build up the fire
sounds so distant. So distant...
It
seems like only seconds later when I feel a hand on my shoulder,
giving me a firm shake. My body feels stuck to the floor. The blanket
is tangled around me. Surely it's not morning yet.
“Wake
up,” Gerdur's voice is soft. “The sun is rising.”
I
heave myself upright. “Okay,” my voice is thick with sleep.
Her
footsteps thud over to the other end of the room, “I've packed you
a breakfast to eat on your journey. Whiterun is nearby, but there is
no time to lose.”
“Right,”
I stagger to my feet, rubbing my eyes. The chain mail feels like ice,
even through my shirt. Outside the window, the streets are dark and
still. But there is a pink tinge on the horizon. Gerdur stirs
something on the hearth, humming softly to herself. A piece of cloth
is wrapped up on the table, bound with a small string. The home is
silent except for Shayn's heavy breathing. He lies asleep on the bed,
lips parted.
Gerdur
glances back at him, “He's much better. The health potion did the
trick.”
I
nod, “Good.” After strapping my bow and quiver to my back, I take
the small package on the table. “I best be off,” my words still
sound a little slurred. “Thank you for your help.”
“Get
a detachment of soldiers here and your debt will be paid,” she nods
to me, her voice kind.
“I
will,” I promise before heading out the door and into the chilling
air. The mill and smithy is silent now. High above, a cloud shrouds
the mountaintops, giving them an air of mystery. My clothing rustles,
making it feel as if a thousand prodding gazes are fixed on me from
the shadows. The horizon is lighter now, making the sky a deep shade
of blue instead of black.
I
make my way down the cobblestone path to the north. A stone bridge
leads out of the village, providing safe passage across the narrow
river. The water travels in a smooth stream, faint and dark. At the
end of the bridge, the path forks. One follows the river going toward
the north and the other leads up the mountain. I take the first one,
following the sounds of the river. Rocks jut up beside the path. The
air smells clean and wet, like the moss growing in the caverns
beneath Helgen. I unwrap the bundle she had given me to find several
thick slices of bread and an apple. The food settles in my stomach
quickly, making my eyelids droop.
My
legs ache as I make my way along the path. I shake them as I go
along, trying to regain the circulation. My armor rattles against the
weaponry strapped to me. As the wind howls through the high peaks, I
glance up, half expecting the dragon to come flying down from the
mountain.
The
minutes drag by in the stillness.
Dew
beads up on the scrubby blades of grass and drips from the fir trees.
The path slopes to the left, heading downward. As the trees around me
thin, I see a fork ahead going in three directions – west, north,
and east. Through the hanging branches, I can make out the huge walls
of Whiterun in the distance. I breathe a relieved sigh.
Thank
the Divines it is so close to Riverwood.
The
river changes from a swift trickle to roaring rapids. Several
Imperial soldiers walk up the road toward me. I put my head down,
hoping beyond hope that they will not recognize me. They pass slowly,
conversing in low tones. I hold my breath, my heart pounding, until
they are safely passed.
When
I reach the fork, I turn to the west. The land around is barren of
trees. Farms surround the city, separated from the grassy land by
short fences. Whiterun looms up from the ground, the gates on the
outside shorter than the towers and enormous palace inside. The grays
of the stone walls and wood roofs blend together. Guards make their
rounds on the streets around the city, faces covered with large
helmets.
After
passing the fragrant farms, I enter through the stone arch and make
my way toward the gate. Guards stand behind the walls and on
platforms around it, keeping a bored, relaxed watch. As I near the
strong, wood gate, a guard starts forward, drawing his sword.
I
tense, one hand going for my weapons.
“Halt!”
he barks. “City's closed with the dragons about. Official business
only.”
I
swallow hard and speak with confidence, “I have news from Helgen
about the dragon attack.”
The
guard falters a moment, his grip tightening. Then he growls, “Fine.
But I'll be keeping an eye on you.”
He
bellows an order, and, after a moment, the gate creaks open. I enter
the city, my footsteps clattering on the cobblestones. Inside the
gate, guards drill soldiers, shouting orders. A woman to the left of
the gate tans leather on a rack. Small homes on either side of the
street are fashioned from aged wood, carved with intricate patterns.
My breath comes in sharply at the beauty of the place. Ahead, carts
line the road, vendors calling out over one another.
“Fresh
meat!”
“Fine
jewelry for sale!”
“Apples,
two septims for three!”
Music
drifts through the air from the inn beyond. A sign mounted out front
reads “The Bannered Mare”. For a moment, I am not sure where to
go. But when I look up, I see the palace, Dragonsreach, looming above
the city. I hurry up the steps to the next level of the city. This
must be the rich district. The homes are painted and carved with
massive bulkheads, sitting high above the street. The people
meandering about the street are dressed in fine clothes. A small
stream runs through the city, carefully controlled by a trench dug
into the stone. In front of Dragonsreach, a gnarled tree grows
surrounded by trellises. Just beyond that is a statue of Talos, the
hero-god that was outlawed by the Thalmor, the god that the
Stormcloaks worship.
Two
large tables are set for several dozen people. In the center of the
hall is a huge hearth. Orange flames blaze up from it. The room
smells of a succulent breakfast, of bread baking and warm honey.
Apple pies and perhaps sweet, glazed ham. Beyond the hearth, a man
sits on a throne, arguing with a men dressed in fine silks.
As
I approach, a woman comes between me and the Jarl. She is obviously a
dark elf – her skin is grey, darkest around her black eyes. Her
leather armor rustles as she walks. “What is the meaning of the
interruption?” her voice is strangely deep. “Jarl Balgruuf is not
receiving visitors.”
I
fold my arms, “I have news from Helgen about the dragon attack.”
Her
eyes narrow, thin lips pressing together, “Well that explains why
the guards let you in. Come on then. The Jarl will want to speak to
you.”
She
leads the way for me to stand in front of the throne. The Jarl's
lanky form is sprawled in a relaxed posture across the throne. One
finger toys with his yellow beard. The firelight glints off his
golden necklaces.
“So,
you were at Helgen,” his eyes search my drawn, sleepy face. “You
saw this dragon with you own eyes?”
“Yes,”
I snort, the anger of the last few days surging beneath my cheeks. “I
had a great view white the Imperials were trying to cut off my head.”
The
Jarl looks faintly amused, “Really? You're certainly...forthright
about your criminal past. But it's none of my concern who the
Imperials want to execute. Especially now.” He leans forward, “What
I want to know is what exactly happened at Helgen?”
I
shrug, shifting back and forth, “The dragon destroyed Helgen, and
last I saw it was heading this way.”
“By
my spear, Irileth was right!” he gasps, glancing at the woman clad
in leather armor. “What do you saw now, Proventus?” he says to
the man who had been arguing with him before. “Shall we continue to
trust in the strength of our walls against a dragon?”
Irileth
steps forward, red hair glowing in the firelight, “We should send
troops to Riverwood at once. It's in the most immediate danger if a
dragon is lurking in the mountains.”
The
man protests, pasty face scrunched, “The Jarl of Falkreth will view
that as a provocation. He will assume we're preparing to join
Ulfric's side and attack it. We should...”
“Enough!”
the Jarl cuts in, voice stern. “I'll not stand idly by while a
dragon burns my Hold and slaughters my people. “Irileth, send a
detachment to Riverwood at once.”
“Yes,
my Jarl,” she salutes and walks down the hall.
The
man stares at the floor, “If you'll excuse me, I'll return to my
duties.”
“That
would be best,” the Jarl nods, heavy brow furrowed.
Proventus
hurries away.
The
Jarl looks at me, silent for a moment. “Well done. You sought me
out on your own initiative. You've done Whiterun a service, and I
won't forget it.” He nods to a servant standing nearby. The servant
comes forward, handing me a heavy bundle on bent knees.
I
take it, feeling the weight of it. Armor, by the looks of it, and of
very good quality.
“Take
this as a token of my esteem,” the Jarl nods.
“Thank
you, my Jarl,” I bow slightly.
He
strokes his chin, eyes thoughtful, “Of course.” Then he
continues, “There is
another thing you could do for me. Suitable for someone of your
particular talents, perhaps.” A faint smile spreads across his
face. He stands, “Come, let's go find Farengar, my court wizard.
He's been looking into a matter of these dragons and...rumors of
dragons. I'll introduce you to him.” His eyes hold a mischievous
gleam, “He can be a bit...difficult. Mages, you know.”
I
follow him to a room on one side of the hall. Maps are laid out
across a long desk along with several soul gems and spell books. On
one wall, a circular alchemy lab casts a green glow about the small
room. A cloaked figure pours over a book behind the desk, his face
shadowed.
“Farengar,”
the Jarl's voice intrudes on the silence of the room, “I think I've
found someone who can help you with your dragon project.”
The
court wizard looks up, dark eyes roving from the Jarl to me. I can't
help but shiver and avoid his gaze. After a moment, he addresses me
in a taut voice, “So the Jarl thinks you can be of use to me.” He
strokes his chin, “He must be referring to my research into the
dragons. Yes, I could use someone to fetch something for me.”
The
thought makes my legs wobble a little, but I shrug, “How hard could
that be?”
A
smile twists his small mouth, “Well, when I say 'fetch' I really
mean delve into a dangerous ruin in search of an ancient stone tablet
that may or may not actually be there.”
I
let out a heavy sigh, suppressing an eye-roll. But I would much
rather help to solve this dragon mystery than leave now. “What does
a stone tablet have to do with dragons?” I pick at my fingernails.
“Ah,
no mere brute mercenary, but a thinker,” Farengar speaks with a
haughty tone to his voice. “You see, when the stories of dragons
began to circulate many dismissed them as mere fantasies, rumors.
Impossibilities. One sure mark of a fool is to dismiss anything that
is outside their experience as being impossible.”
The
Jarl gives me a here we go again
sort of look.
“But
I began to search for information about dragons – where had they
gone all these years ago? And where were they coming from? I, ah,
learned of a certain stone tablet said to be housed in Bleak Falls
Barrow – a “Dragonstone” said to contain a map of dragon burial
sites.” He points at me, “Go to Bleak Falls Barrow, find this
tablet – no doubt interred in the main chamber – and bring it to
me. Simplicity itself.”
I
shift back and forth for a long moment, mulling things over, then
nod, “Alright.”
Farengar
grins down at me, “Well then, off to Bleak Falls Barrow with you.
The Jarl is not a patient man. Neither am I, come to think of it.”
I
snort.
“This
is priority now,” the Jarl nods, scratching his chin. “Anything
we can use to fight this dragon, or dragons. We need it, quickly,
before it's too late.”
“Of
course, Jarl Balgruuf,” Farengar nods. “You have given me a most
able assistant. I am sure she will prove most useful.” He gives me
a pointed look.
I
nod, folding my arms.
The
Jarl turns to me, “Succeed at this, and you will be rewarded.
Whiterun will be in your debt.”
The
idea of compensation tips the scales. “Very well,” I say.
Then
I turn and head down the hall. To Bleak Falls Barrow. To uncover the
mystery.
Thursday, February 12, 2015
Unbound - Part 2
Well, here's the next part of my Skyrim fanfic. I am really enjoying doing this just for the fun of it. I kind of drifted from what actually happened in the game because most of it was just gore.
I hope you enjoy!
I hope you enjoy!
An
earth-shaking roar makes my heart leap into my throat. Wind whips
past my face. My neck still across the block, I look up. Something
swoops past. The shadow of the tower looms above me.
“What
in Oblivion is that?!” General Tulius cries.
The
headsman's ax is raised to strike, dark eyes meeting mine from
beneath the black mask. His arms are tensed for the blow.
Suddenly,
a huge, scaled creature lands on the tower above us, making the
ground rumble. The headsman falters, looking back and gaping. The
serpentine creature's huge wings fall down over the tower, gripping
the sides. Bits of stone give away beneath its claws. From beneath
the rows and rows of sharp, silver scales, two red orbs pierce into
the company. Above that are two horns bending back toward its long
spine. I hear the sounds of weaponry sliding from its casing. Shouts
and screams all around.
A
woman shrieks, “Dragon!”
Hadvar
stands in front of the block, sword at the ready. “Archers!” he
bellows.
Then
the dragon opens its mouth, issuing a sound like thunder. A quick
wave of light blasts toward us. The impact knocks me back. My face
smashes into the ground. Someone steps on me. Moss and cobblestones
flash in front of my eyes. Shouts. Screams. Black spots speckle my
vision. I hear another roar and a crash like an avalanche from the
mountains.
Gulping
air, I heave to my knees. Blood runs down one arm from a nasty
scrape.
Pandemonium.
The tower is a flaming heap of rock across the road toward the gate.
People run here and there. Imperials rally on one side of the fort,
shooting at the black shadow flitting across the sky.
A
rough hand closes around my arm, “Hey, kinsman! Get up! The gods
won't give us another chance!”
I
look up at Ralof's dirty face. His bindings have been cut. He looks
strangely calm though he has to shout to be heard over the tumult. I
nod, struggling to my feet.
“This
way!” he dashes toward a tower opposite the one that had collapsed.
The heavy wooden door is open. The dragon swoops above, blasting a
house to the right into a pile of ash.
The
moment we enter the tower, the door is slammed shut behind us. I gasp
for air. A thick scent of blood chokes me. Several Stormcloaks lie on
the floor, clutching bloody wounds, some crying out loudly and others
lying still. Ulfric stands nearby, watching several people try to get
the wounded on their feet.
“Jarl
Ulfric!” Ralof pants. “What is that thing?! Could the legends be
true?!”
Ulfric's
voice rumbles deep in his throat, “Legends don't burn down
villages.” Then he orders, “We need to move! Now!”
Ralof
dashes up the circular staircase, calling back to me, “Up to the
tower! Let's go!”
I
hurry after him, my heart pounding inside my chest. “Where are we
supposed to go?! There's no way out!”
We
come to the landing. A second later, the wall bursts open. Ralof
leaps back toward me, pressing himself against the wall to avoid the
large chunks of flying rock. I see the dragon's huge head a moment
before it sends a blast of fire through the hole. I duck down behind
Ralof, heat filling the tower. The fire stops, leaving the rock
charred and blackened.
Ralof
peers around the corner, then hurries to the hole and looks out. Most
of Helgen is visible from here, the houses aflame, rocks flung about,
people crouching in corners like rats hiding from the light.
Ralof
points, “See the inn on the other side?!”
I
look down. The inn is only partially aflame, most of the roof fallen
in. It lies several feet below. “Yeah!”
“Jump
through the roof and keep going!”
Without
hesitation I leap from the hole. For a long moment, I am suspended in
the air, my surroundings rushing past. Then my feet slam into the
floor, and I topple over, unable to catch myself with my wrists
bound. Heat presses in on every side. I scramble to my feet and hurry
over to a hole in the floor. Then I drop through and emerge back in
the street, on the other side of the fallen tower.
“Haming!
You need to get over here! Now!” I see Hadvar crouching near the
wall of a house.
A
boy stands in the road, backing away from a fallen form. To my
horror, the enormous form of the dragon looms on the street close
behind the form, watching. I remember the boy that had been told to
wait inside by his father – this must be him.
“That's
it, little cub,” the fallen man rasps as the boy inches back. “Make
me proud.”
The
dragon opens its mouth.
“Gods,
everyone get back!” he grabs the boy and pulls him behind the house
as the dragon sends a blast of fire toward him. I throw myself down
next to them, the flame singeing my clothing. The fallen man is
engulfed. “Torolf!” Hadvar shouts.
I
cover my mouth, letting out a choked yelp. Memories of my father
flash before my eyes.
The
dragon spreads its wings and swoops back into the sky, still circling
the fort.
Hadvar
looks back at me, one side of his face bloody. A stricken look is
frozen on his expression. “Still alive, prisoner? Stay close to me
if you want to say that way.” He looks back at an Imperial standing
near the sobbing boy, “Gunnar, take care of the boy. I have to find
General Tulius and join the defense.” Then he runs out across the
cobblestones.
“Gods
guide you, Hadvar,” the Imperial murmurs.
I
run after him. Sounds and images flash before my eyes, blurred and
confused. Burnt bodies strewn across the ground. Cries of pain.
Arrows flying. Fire everywhere. We pass men shooting at the dragon as
it flies by.
We
are going by a wall when Hadvar ducks down, bellowing, “Stay close
to the wall!”
I
lunge against the wall just as the dragon lands on top of it. Its
wings grip the stones above us. A house in front of us bursts into
flames. It takes flight again.
Hadvar
tosses words over his shoulder, weaving his way through the ruins of
the fort, “Quickly! Follow me! It's you and me, prisoner!”
The
gate that leads out of the fort is blocked by another fallen tower.
We work our way past it, ducking to avoid falling wreckage and the
cursing, screaming people. We are near the middle of the fort,
passing under an arc of stone. Two small, stone buildings lie next to
the wall. Ralof comes from another archway, standing in front of
Hadvar with his sword drawn.
“Ralof,
you damned traitor!” Hadvar's voice is thick with fury. “Out of
my way!”
Ralof's
eyes are narrowed and yet triumphant, “We're escaping, Hadvar!
You're not stopping us this time!”
Hadvar
snaps, “Fine! I hope the dragon takes all of you to Sovngarde!”
He runs past.
Ralof
gestures toward me, heading for a door in one of the stone buildings,
“You! Come on! Into the keep!”
I
dash after him, waiting in an agony of impatience as he fumbles to
open it. Dragon fire rushes toward us as we slam the door shut and
bolt it.
Then
there is only silence. I gasp for air, feeling the cold air chill my
hot, sweaty body. After a moment, I look around at the small,
circular room. Moss grows in cracks between the stones that make up
the walls. The floor is muddy. A gate-like door lies on either side
of the room. Next to a small table lies the still bodies of two
Stormcloaks.
I
shiver.
Ralof
kneels down beside them, closing their eyes. His voice is soft,
“We'll meet again in Sovngarde, brother.” After a long moment, he
stands, wiping his eyes. He looks back at me, “Looks like we're the
only ones that made it. That thing was a dragon! Just like the
children's tales and legends! The harbingers of the End times.”
“I
thought...” my voice quavers, “I thought that they were gone for
good.”
“As
did I.” He takes a deep breath as if to calm himself. “We had
better get moving. Come here. Let me see if I can get those bindings
off.”
I
offer my bound wrists. He cuts the rope with the blade of his sword.
“There
you go,” he forces a weak smile and gestures to the fallen
Stormcloaks. “You may as well take their gear. They won't be
needing it anymore.”
I
nod and kneel down beside them. They are both men; I take the armor
from the smaller of the two. The chain-mail falls heavily across my
shoulders, reaching past my knees and elbows. After pulling on the
blue cotton tunic, I strap the leather vest over it.
Ralof
walks over to the door on the right, “I'm going to see if there's
another way out of here.” He tries the door, but it is locked.
I
pick up an iron sword. The rough grip feels so familiar, so
comforting.
Shouts
echo through the place, coming toward the room from the left door.
“Someone's coming!” I look at Ralof.
Ralof
hisses, ducking next to the door, “It's the Imperials. Take cover.”
I
press myself against the wall on the other side, holding the sword at
the ready and listening.
Anger
boils inside me as I hear the sharp voice of the Imperial Captain
ordering, “Come on! Get this gate open!”
The
gate slides open. Ralof strikes down the first Imperial that comes
through.
The
Captain shouts, “Stormcloaks! Don't let them get away!”
I
lunge forward away from the wall so that I will have room. The
Captain charges past Ralof – who is locked into battle with another
Imperial – and swings her sword at me. I block the blow with my
sword, the impact jarring my arm. I have trained with weaponry all my
life, but then, I bet she has too. And she has a shield.
She
holds her shield at the ready, dark eyes narrowed.
I
feint toward the left, then swing the sword toward the weak spot in
her armor, above the hip and under her arm. She knocks my sword away
from her, counter attacking with her own. I duck under the blow. My
hand locks around her wrist, jerking her to the side and stabbing my
sword into her back beneath the armor. She cries out, then falls limp
to the floor in a pool of her own blood.
I
shudder, looking away.
Ralof
slides his sword into its sheath, searching the pockets of the
Imperials. “Maybe one of these Imperials had the key.”
As
he searches, I pull the shield from the Captain's slack arm and strap
it to my own. “Find anything?” I ask.
“Aha,
here it is,” he pulls the key out and walks over to the other door,
unlocking it. “Come on.”
We
weave our way through the dark place, groping. The occasional crack
in the ceiling sheds a cold ray of light. After a while, we find a
few torches, and Ralof lights one. The orange light casts on eerie
glow over the stone walls. A musty smell chokes me as we go farther
and farther. Except the occasional shelf next to the wall or crumpled
bedroll in adjoining rooms, the place is completely bare.
The
place suddenly begins to rumble, bits of rock raining down on us. All
at once, the ceiling behind us collapses. We dive out of the way.
Dust makes it difficult to breathe.
Ralof
chokes between bouts of coughing, “No
going back that way now. We better push on. The rest of them will
have to find another way out.”
“Right,” I choke.
The
minutes drag past like eternities.
Then
I hear the sounds of fighting up ahead. After a moment, the sounds
fade into silence. As we round the corner, Ralof shudders, “Trolls
blood! The torture room...”
But
the torturer lies dead, a cowl covering his face. Several Stormcloaks
are searching the empty cells.
Ralof
asks, “Is Jarl Ulfric with you?”
A
woman with her hair pulled back in the remnants of a braid replies,
“No. I haven't seen him since the dragon showed up. But we came in
through there,” she points to another door.
Ralof
begins stuffing supplies into his pockets.
After
a quick search, I find a small bag of gold and tie it to my belt. A
bow and quiver lie near one wall, probably taken from an unlucky
prisoner. I take those and strap them to my back.
I
hear a groan and turn. Ralof crouches down next to a man – he leans
against the wall, his wiry body tensed. There is an awful cut on his
leg and several spots on side where he was obviously burned. His
olive skin is smudged with dirt, his angular face scrunched. He must
be a Nord, but his face seems a little too elvish. Ragged black hair
hangs into his face, a braid, longer than the rest, falling to his
shoulder.
“He
needs treatment,” the woman looks at Ralof. “We are going to stay
here to see if anyone else makes it through. Take him with you.”
Ralof
nods slowly, “Shayn, are you able to walk?”
A
smirk twists his lips. He's younger than most of the men I've seen
today, probably only a few years older than me. “Ever since I was
knee high to a Skeever,” his voice is strained.
Ralof
chuckles, pulling him to his feet, “Come on, then.”
Shayn
winces, leaning against him heavily.
Ralof
looks back at me, “We'd better move on. We've got to get out before
the dragon brings the whole place down on our heads.”
I
nod, and we make our way down the hall. There are empty cells on
either side. After a few minutes we come to a dead end. Ralof holds
out the torch in front of him. There is a hole in the ceiling, large
enough to crawl through.
“Let's
see where this leads,” Ralof hands Shayn the torch. Then he jumps
up, grabbing on and heaving himself up. Shayn leans against the wall,
holding up the torch. His face is pallid; sweat beads on his
forehead.
He
looks at me, his gray eyes somehow playful, “You're not one of us,
are you?”
I
shake my head.
“Come
on,” Ralof calls down. “This might be a way out.”
He
reaches a hand down. I take the torch from Shayn, and he grips my
shoulder as he limps over to the hole. Ralof pulls him up, then me.
The torch reveals a narrow pathway. We follow it, our breathing loud
in the heavy silence.
Voices
come from up ahead. Ralof and Shayn exchange glances and we make our
way forward cautiously. The narrow path broadens into a huge cavern
with stalactites pointing down toward the floor. Glowing mushrooms
grow on the walls. Ralof snuffs out the torch. In the middle of the
cavern stands a large group of Imperials, many of them lying down,
obviously wounded. Their voices are hushed, but the echo carries
their words to us.
“Our
orders were to wait until General Tulius arrives.”
“For
Arkay's sake, we need to leave! That dragon could bring this whole
place down.”
Ralof
leans over, his lips near my ear, “We'd better sneak around. I'd
really rather not tangle with them right now. Keep your bow ready.
We'll take it nice and slow.”
I
nod, making my way forward, crouched down next to the wall. As I go,
I take the bow off my back and nock an arrow to it. I've always had
more ability with a bow than other weapons. Fallen boulders and
stalactites help to conceal us. Ralof supports Shayn, walking behind
me. My heart pounds in my throat. Every time an Imperial turns in our
direction I expect him to shout and draw his sword. Sweat trickles
down my face. We are nearing the other end of the cavern when one man
looks straight at me, standing nearby.
Hadvar.
I
draw back the bowstring, aiming the arrow at his chest. Can't
breathe.
He
doesn't make a sound, staring at me.
Our
eyes lock in one meaningful look, then he turns away, saying nothing.
I
let the string go loose without releasing the arrow, continuing on.
Adrenaline makes my limbs shake. He's not going to say anything. Once
we reach the other end, we slip through the passage, unseen.
Ralof
hisses, “What was that?”
I
shrug.
The
stone path begins to slope upward beneath us, the walls pressing
close on every side. I grope my way forward, unable to see anything
in the blackness. My breaths become labored.
Then
I see a light up ahead.
“There!”
Ralof points. “We're almost there!”
Our
pace quickens, and, what seems like seconds later, we emerge into the
sunlight. Helgen is nowhere in sight.
Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Unbound - Part 1
Hi there. I'm back again. So I decided to write some fanfiction from Skyrim, a video game that I play occasionally. This is just me practicing so PLEASE don't expect a lot of quality. I'm going to try to follow the basic storyline of the game, although I might make up some stuff for the sake of keeping things interesting and relatively clean.
I hope you enjoy!
Part 1 -- Unbound
I hope you enjoy!
Part 1 -- Unbound
The
wooden cart bumps and jolts beneath me as it is dragged along the
loose cobblestones. An icy breeze, carrying with it the soft scent of
snow, stirs the dark mop of hair hanging into my face. A dull throb
pounds in my head. White light bores into my eyes as I try to force
them open. I issue a faint groan, letting my eyelids slam shut again.
Horses' hooves clop on the road ahead and behind. The occasional
shout makes my head shriek in protest. Coarse rope digs into my
wrists.
I
force my eyes open, squinting. Small snowflakes stick to my
eyelashes. The carts are driven by men wearing red tunics with
leather and chain-mail armor over them. Each one is loaded with the
dirty, drooping forms of other prisoners. Mountains loom up all
around us, jutting from the rocky terrain and piercing the low
clouds.
“Hey,
you,” the sound makes my head ache. I look to one of the men
sitting across from me in the cart. His face is broad and leathery,
but his blue eyes hold a strange depth. “You're finally awake,”
he offers a wan smile, his thin lips twisting. “Ralof,” it takes
me a moment to realize that he is offering his name.
I
nod, rubbing my hand against my face; I feel dried blood crusted on
my forehead.
The
happenings of last night slowly come back to me, beginning with me
journeying toward Morrowind to visit my deceased mother's homeland
and ending with a hard blow to the head from the pommel of an
Imperial's sword.
After
a moment, the man continues, “You were trying to cross the border,
right? Ran into that Imperial ambush, same as us, and that thief over
there.” He glances at man next to him.
The
man shoots him a glare, his eyes bugging out of his sunken,
weasel-like face. “Damn you Stormcloaks. Skyrim was fine until you
came along. Empire was nice and lazy. If they hadn't been looking for
you I could have stolen that horse and been half-way to Hammerfell by
now.” He stares down at his bound wrists, his low brow knitting.
His shirt looks more like a burlap sack with holes cut in it than
actual clothing.
I
remember seeing him flying down the road the night before when I was
near the border. He almost trampled me, but the horse bucked to avoid
me. I had drawn my sword, thinking he was a thug. We were just about
to tear each other apart when we saw the company of Stormcloaks
slinking through the shadows. They were barely visible in the
moonlight; we were too close to run. They jerked him from his horse,
seizing me as well. We were accused of being Imperial spies and were
about to suffer accordingly. But then, out of the darkness came the
light of many torches. Imperial soldiers rushed out of the night
bellowing war cries. The Stormcloaks, caught off guard, fought back –
they completely forgot about us. But the Imperials did not
distinguish between the two of us and the Stormcloaks.
The
thief suddenly looks up at me, shadows beneath his eyes, “You
there. You and me – we shouldn't be here. It's these Stormcloaks
the empire wants.”
I
remain silent, picking at the knots of my bonds. The cool air makes me
shiver. My dirty wool clothing does little to ward away the piercing
chill.
Ralof's
voice rumbles inside his chest, strong but not quite angry, “We're
all brothers in binds now, horse thief.”
“Shut
up back there!” the Imperial driving our cart orders, holding the
reins in a tight grip.
The
path twists through the rocky terrain, sloping steadily downward. The
small, shrubby fir trees droop beneath the covering of snow.
The
thief looks over at the third man in the cart – he sits with his
back turned to us, one foot propped against the side of the cart and
the other dangling over the side. A heavy cloak of animal skins hangs
from his broad shoulders. “What's wrong with him, huh?” his small
mouth twists in a smirk.
The
man glances back at us through dark, shrewd eyes. His tawny hair is
pulled back away from his rugged face by several braids, and his
short beard is also pulled together in a braid. A gray cloth is bound
tight across his mouth.
Ralof
snaps, his eyes piercing, “Watch your tongue! You're speaking to
Ulfric Stormcloak, the true high king.”
The
thief's face mirrors my horror. “Ulfric?” he gasps, turning on
the man in the fur cloak. “Jarl of Windhelm? You're the leader of
the rebellion. But if they've captured you... Oh gods, where are they
taking us?”
Ralof
scratches his stubbly chin against his chain mail sleeve. The blue
tunic over it is torn, held together only by the thick leather straps
that his weaponry used to be attached to. “I don't know where we're
going,” his voice is distant, “but Sovngarde awaits.”
The
thief stares at the bottom of the cart as it rattles beneath us, “No,
this can't be happening. This isn't happening!”
I
shake my head, my fists clenched, “They have to know that we aren't
one of you. We just ran into you on accident.”
Ralof
doesn't reply, his eyes searching the land around us. As the ground
continues to slope, the snow becomes thinner, mixed with dirt. A
tower looms up from the trees and rocks ahead. As we come closer, I
see a small fortress nestled among the rocks. The walls surrounding
it are made of stones held in place by mortar. Above that, split logs
that have been bound together and carved into points at the top.
Sentries pace back and forth behind it on raised platforms. Tattered
Imperial flags hang from long poles. He looks over at the thief,
“Hey, what village are you from, horse thief?”
The
thief snaps, “Why do you care?”
Ralof's
voice is soft, “A Nord's last thoughts should be of home.”
After
a moment, the thief looks up through wide eyes, “Rorikstead.
I'm...I'm from Rorikstead.”
As
we enter the open gate of the fort, a man calls out, “General
Tulius! The headsman is waiting!”
The
thief cries, “Shor, Mara, Dibella, Kynareth, Akatosh. Divines,
please help me!”
A
man riding on a Bay horse in front of the train of carts replies, his
voice gruff, “Good. Let's get this over with.” He rides to the
side, letting the carts pass him as they go into the fortress. His
thin, wiry body is covered in gilded Imperial armor. He stops to
speak with a rider waiting just inside the gate. I immediately
recognize the rider to be one of the Thalmor – the high elves have
seemed to have more authority over Skyrim than the Imperials
themselves, ever since the White-Gold concordant, that is. Two other
elves stand beside the dark horse, their gold armor glinting in the
white light.
Ralof
scowls, “Look at him, General Tulius the military governor. And it
looks like the Thalmor are with them. Damn elves... I bet they had
something to do with this.”
We
slowly go past little houses constructed of aged wood. People who do
not appear to be soldiers stand on porches, watching in silence. The
large, stone tower looms above us.
Ralof
issues a heavy sigh, his eyes staring past me into the distance,
“This is Helgen. I used to be sweet on a girl from here. Wonder if
Vilad is still making that mead with juniper berries mixed in. Funny,
when I was a boy Imperial walls and towers used to make me feel so
safe...”
I
can't help but turn away when I see the mist in his eyes.
I
hear a small voice behind us as we wind through the fort, “Who are
they, daddy? Where are they going?”
A
stronger voice replies, “You need to go inside, little cub.” The
fatherly tone, it's been so long since I've heard that.
“Why?”
the boy protests. “I want to watch the soldiers.”
He
orders, “Inside the house. Now.”
“Yes,
papa.”
“Whoa!”
the Imperial driving our cart pulls back on the reins, stopping us
beside the other carts loaded with Stormcloak prisoners.
The
Imperial captain, a woman with a face like a hawk clad in heavy,
plated armor, commands, “Get these prisoners out of the carts! Move
it!”
The
thief yelps, “Why are we stopping?”
Ralof
looks at him, his eyes slowly roving across the faces around him,
“Why do you think? End of the line.” After a moment, he offers me
a wan smile, “Let's go. Shouldn't keep the gods waiting for us.”
I
force a smile in return and swallow down my pounding heart. We stand
and begin to climb down from the cart. The Imperial captain and
another man in Imperial armor stand behind the cart, waiting.
The
thief protests, eyes wild, “No! Wait! We're not rebels!”
Ralof
snaps, “Face your death with some courage, thief.”
He
hurries up to stand in front of the Imperial captain, looking back at
Ralof, “You've got to tell them! We weren't with you! This a
mistake!”
The
Imperial captain shoves him back, not the slightest hint of sympathy
in her dark eyes, “Step toward the block when we call your name!
One at a time!”
Ralof
grumbles as he jumps out of the cart, “Empire loves their damn
lists...”
The
man beside her begins to read from the list, “Ulfric Stormcloak,
Jarl of Windhelm.”
Ulfric
comes forward, walking past them and around the carts to where the
chopping block waits, surrounded by prisoners and Imperial soldiers.
The headsman holds a heavy ax in his hand, watching from beneath his
black mask.
The
man continues, “Ralof of Riverwood.”
Ralof
doesn't look at me as he follows Ulfric, but there isn't any regret,
at least none that shows.
The
man calls the next name, “Lokir of Rorikstead.”
Lokir
yelps, his eyes wide with hysteria, “No! I'm not a rebel! You can't
do this!” He dashes past them back toward the gate.
The
Imperial captain shouts, “Halt! Archers!”
I
open my mouth to protest but then remain silent. He's dead either
way.
“You're
not going to kill me!” he shrieks just before the arrows plunge
into his back. He drops to the ground without so much as a whimper.
The
Imperial captain turns again, her swarthy face lined with fury,
“Anyone else feel like running?” Then she orders, “Continue,
Hadvar.”
Hot
anger boils inside me.
Hadvar
looks at me through eyes that almost seem kind, “Wait. You there.
Step forward.”
I
take a couple steps forward, limping a little as the feeling returns
to my legs. The long ride had made them almost completely numb.
His
eyes narrow, “Who are you?”
I
scowl before I reply, “Myra.”
“Of?”
he raises an eyebrow.
“Anywhere
I choose.”
He
nods, writing something on the list, “You picked a bad time to be
in Skyrim, kinsman.”
A
slight smile creases my face. He thinks I am fully Nord despite my
sharp features and skin that has a slight grayish hue, that this is
my homeland, that my blood is not corrupted by my Dunmer legacy.
“Captain,”
Hadvar looks at her, “what should we do? She's not on the list.”
She
snorts, “Forget the list! She goes to the block.”
The
man nods, his hair hanging into his face, “By your orders.” He
looks at me steadily, “I'm sorry. At least you'll die here, in your
homeland. Follow the captain, prisoner.”
A
pang of fear makes my insides ice cold. I follow the captain
mechanically to the chopping block where the other prisoners wait,
faces downcast and yet still proud. In the center stands Ulfric
Stormcloak and General Tulius.
The
General regards the company with a look of triumph, but his words are
directed to Ulfric, “Ulfric Stormcloak. Some here in Helgen call
you a hero,” a smirk twists his lips. “But a hero doesn't use a
power like the Voice to murder his king and usurp his throne.”
Ulfric's
eyes narrow, and he lets out a grunt of protest through the gag.
General
Tulius' voice becomes low, “You started this war, plunged Skyrim
into chaos, and now the empire is going to put you down and restore
the peace!”
Just
then, a strange sound comes from high above, like a distant shriek
and the rushing of a mighty wind.
Hadvar
gasps, “What was that?”
“It's
nothing,” General Tulius replies quickly, eyes searching the cloudy
sky. “Carry on.” He moves back.
“Yes,
General Tulius,” the captain comes forward with all the pomp of a
peacock. “Give them their last rights.”
A
woman wearing the orange and yellow robes of a priestess of Arkay
raises her hands, cloaked face turned toward the sky, “As we
commend your souls to Aetherius, blessings of the eight divines be
upon you...”
One
of the prisoners comes forward, scowling, “For the love of Talos,
SHUT UP, and let's get this over with!”
Her
eyes narrow, and she steps back, “As you wish.”
He
comes to stand in front of the block, light-colored eyes piercing
those of his captors. “Come on! I haven't got all morning!”
The
Imperial captain pushes him to his knees, forcing his head onto the
block.
He
glares at the ground in front of him, “My ancestors are smiling at
me, Imperials. Can you say the same?”
The
headsman raises the ax, then swings it down.
I
flinch, looking away. The Imperial captain kicks his body aside.
Blood runs between the cobblestones.
One
of the Stormcloaks cries, “You Imperial bastards!”
General
Tulius bellows back, “Justice!”
The
captain sneers, resting one heavy boot on the block, “Death to the
Stormcloaks!”
Ralof,
who stands next to me with a sad expression, murmurs, “As fearless
in death as he was in life...”
“Next!”
the captain orders, gesturing at me, “The Nord in the rags!”
My
heart drops into my stomach.
The
strange sound comes again, louder this time. The trees around the
fort rustle, chunks of snow dropping to the ground.
“There
is is again!” Hadvar sounds wary. “Did you hear that?”
The
captain shoots him a murderous glance, “I said, next prisoner!”
“To
the block, prisoner,” he gives me that steady look. “Nice and
easy.”
I
walk forward slowly as in a dream and kneel down in front of the
block. I can see the head of the man who had gone before me,
white-faced, blank eyes staring somewhere past me. A small shudder
wracks my body. A boot stomps down on my back, forcing me down onto
the block, already wet with the previous man's blood.
I
barely hear the shriek that comes from the mountains above. The man
raises the ax. I squeeze my eyes shut.
Sovngarde
awaits!
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